This is beautiful... :)
Absolutely realistic :) This really does reflect the society in many ways...
Well, sometimes there's a point when a person has to give up listening to society. :)
A very well written and meaningful poem! Well done! :D
Well written piece, the pressures society places on us is a crime, so well described in this write.
Aw, that's quite sad. Yes, many people feel pressured by society and just give up sometimes.
I enjoyed this write, easy to fall prey to all the TV and magazine hype on how we should look. Voted
@knightwriter you're very welcome. Just one thing: Find an online poetry contest (other than wattpad) and enter it. this is so powerful, it's bound to go far!
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