Winner

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knightwriter By knightwriter Updated a year ago
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Very positive and uplifting! Universal, I think everyone can relate to this. It's like an anthem. Well I think of it as an anthem, especially for youthful society today.
Love this one too. and those voices can just go away. V. A real winner, Kay
Thank you so much for the dedication! This is such an amazing poem.. I love this so much
Thank you again!
This is beautiful... :)
Absolutely realistic :) This really does reflect the society in many ways...
The best kind of writing paints both the darkness of the world and the way out(: This does that, in a way...a sad way...but the voices, the little commands, are so common today and sometimes do lead to that ending (of death). The only way to fight it...what is that? Thanks for sharing(:
Echoes of the Stepford Wives run through this. Excellent poem. Voted.