It has a really good plotline. I chuckled at the Swag Swag on you part. There are some minor issues but nothing that's like awful! Good job :)
Nice start, I like the idea. There were some minor errors but this story looks like it has potential, I will definitely keep reading.
i love the concept of this, totally unique! upload soon i wanna see where this goes!
that was a kind of funny start. i mean, i can relate to the fact that these days... SWAG is all that counts
ahaha i love the start of this. (: i will keep reading because im curious to know what is going to happen, good work! (:
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