Cheaters [ON HOLD]

He was leaning in too close now; I could feel the sweet warm breaths coming from his mouth. He knew. And he was going to threaten me with it. "I have a secret," he whispered. His hands wrapped around my waist, and I found my heart beating faster and faster; A hummingbird heart. "We both know you're a cheater," he said, smirking with the corners of his lips. "But that's not the secret." He leaned in closer to my ear. "The secret is that I'm a cheater too."
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Mysterious. Keep the story in one tense! I didn't really get the last sentence of the first paragraph. It was nice though and descriptive. Wish it was longer.
Wow! love this she's like mysterious and down to earth all in one.
Your writing has hooked me in by not revealing much ;)
This is amazing. I got hooked on the first words. Great job, keep it up and may the odds be ever in your favor! :)
#ThatIsMahogany!
@Quiller If you really want to change it, you don't have to delete it. Can't you just rename it?
i kind of wonder who the characters are to eachother - friend, sisters, mother daughter... but i like how you started this!!
@Quiller Yeah. I realized that when i read that it was very close to your heart. This should be interest as heck lol


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