Awe, this was a cute chapter. I love the relationship she has with Noah. I also love his personality. Good length for a chapter, (: Good work,
Romantic. Noah kind of makes me think of a player-type, carefree kind of guy. You have a solid writing style and a good beginning. Nice job, =]
very strong opening! You are amzing with dialogue and description! I was also astounded at how well you described character relationships! keep it up! voted!
OH MY GOD, I LUV NOAH. but u just had to kill him off in the first chapter, i'm pretty sure u have good reasons though. extremely cute.-voted-
I loved it! Some missing commas but nevertheless, you have good grammar. And I got hooked. :") I love besties falling in love <3
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