Foster Brother?

15 Part Story 17.7K Reads 292 Votes
_pancake_liz By _pancake_liz Updated a year ago
“Oh my gobstoppers…
‘Allie, this is Jay and his sister, Alex. They will be staying with us for a while. We decided to file for foster care.’” 
Allie has a nice house, good clothes, great grades, and a pretty good life, at least, that’s what it looks like on the outside. She’s got problems going on, everyone does, right?
Jay has been in foster care for a couple years now. Soon he will be eighteen and will be able to go out on his own and can support his sister too. He’s tired of the same routine every time. The foster parents are either really mean or way to nice. It never works out, but maybe this time it will…
Then there’s Nate, the player trying to pursue Allie, and Riley, her ex. Oh, and don’t forget Leslie, the one person trying to make her life miserable. 
Secrets don’t make friends…they make enemies and there is definitely some stuff everyone is trying to hide.
justicee_ justicee_ a year ago
one of the best things I've read in a while! Mind checking out my story? It would mean a lot! Xx
colorguardislife colorguardislife 2 years ago
I saw Graham Wardle's picture and I was like 'Oh my gosh! I have to read this!' 
Love it so far(:
angellover254 angellover254 2 years ago
@misspancakeforever98 yeah...sorry about that! I think I got distracted by the picture and then wrote the first name I saw which was Alex.
angellover254 angellover254 2 years ago
@misspancakeforever98 Haha, oops I wrote Alex by mistakes...(since she's his sister) I meant Jay, haha!
angellover254 angellover254 2 years ago
Write out your numbers and don't say BTW in your chapters, it just doesn't go well in stories. And I must say Alex is hot xD
angellover254 angellover254 2 years ago
Aw...Snickerdoodles, favorite line xD But yeah good start even though it was short. Just make sure to check over your grammar and spelling, but everything else looks fine.