The Monster Within ON HOLD
Gabriel is a Belial, the only bloodline of vampire to feel human emotions. He was turned 10 years ago against his will. Now, 10 years later, he struggles with his guilt over his coldblooded killing of innocent people, and with his constant bloodlust. On the verge of insanity like so many others of his bloodline, Gabe doesn’t know what’s real and what isn’t. All he knows is that reality is slipping further from his grasp…until his meets Alyssa. She calms the monster within, but can she forgive him his sins? Or will his dark, dangerous past, and even darker enemies, get the better of them? Together, will they be able to fight the bloodlust that threatens to take Gabe over? Or is it too late for him to be saved?
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MaryB99
I love your description, they instantly draw the reader in. They're very vivid. Your plot seems cool aswell, not cliché like most.
WOW! You could feel the emotion vibrating in your words! It was descriptive. No errors. And action filled. I will definitely vote for this in the watty awards!
@midnight-disaster And, you will notify me through inbox? ._. lol xD I'll be waiting!
@midnight-disaster I hope it wins. I'll add it to my library to check up on it later :)
@midnight-disaster I wish you luck again xD And, still, no updates? D: Doctor Higgen and Millard tsk at you :/
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