@lovelyhaerts Well still i see no flaws except for a few spelling/grammer <<< YEAH I SPELL GRAMMER WRONG! mistakes
I really like this ! Everything has room for improvement tho ! I would go over it once or twice but over all I love the story line !
It's no problem. Its a win for me too cause i get to read what you write. Also i will deffinately update so you must keep your promise
your a great writer! You are really good at creating conversations with the characters. Update soon
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