U don't even know how much I love this type of stories. I will sure keep reading!
wow, this is an amazing story! I love it all, the plot, the characters and everything! I definitely will continue reading this!!
Grammatical errors almost everywhere, misused punctuation and lack of vocabulary. However, you do in fact have a good story. 8/10
I enjoyed this chapter a lot. I think you have a great start for sure. This was also nice and detailed. Good luck! :)
Very interesting, just loved it. No mistakes that I can see, loved the length and the dialogs...just great.
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