wow I really liked this poem. It flowed really well and there were some truths in it. nothing last forever- very true. Great job!
I love the emotion and the power that the poetry has as well as it's amazing ability to visualize it. I really like it, great job!
I like this poem!! i love how i can visualise it!!
it captures people.. good job, my sister is still interupting me.. urgh! lol
nicely written...so beautiful and sad . Nothing lasts forever. so sad . great poem. voted ~)K
I loved the way you phrased it, it was so beautiful. It is sad though. A beginning warrants an ending...
Amazing poem!!! the writing was wonderful and the meaning was beautiful...
I would have to agree with others, this poem needs votes!
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