@CaoimheGrace Haha it is fine. You were just pointing something out no harm done. :)
I don't read thrillers simple because I never find any good ones but this is awesome! It's well written and had me racing to read the next chapter.
really captivating. how did she end up out in the snow like that? i love the use of descriptions, it's really taking me there in my mind. its a real thriller
Wow, I felt really uncomfortable while reading this, thats just how vivid your descriptions were! Loved and voted, just amazing, really creepy too...loved it!
Wonderful beginning! I feel you have some serious potential. What era is this in? I'll add this in my 'maybe' library(:
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