This was stunning, reminded me of "Once Upon a Time". You're very creative and your writing is vivid and easy to follow. Voted and onto the next chapters!
This is a really good chapter that draws the reader in and makes you want to read more! Great job! Other than that, everything is amazing!
I like the start, it builds suspicion I wonder what will happen now that she's bonded, will she be corrupted? Nice job!
This catches your attention, fast! & as others said the details are incredible. Love the concept, voted!
This really caught my attention, I liked it alot. You did spear right to the point, and I liked that.
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