wow...I've never read anything like that before. I absolutely love seeing metaphors in poems, but this was just...amazing.
Wow Very heavy, I had to reread it a few times. Love it! Nicely done! I write dark poetry and I was wondering if maybe you could check out mine...?
there aren't enough words in the English dictionary to describe how amazing this poem is but, the first one that does come to mind, is BEAUTIFUL
Absolutely beautiful poem! I really love the imagery you used for each one- kind of magical and sad. Wonderfully written! =) -Sarah
it was beautiful. i have read a similar poem but you managed to make it your own.
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