The Enemy's Brother (Editing)

18 Part Story 15.3K Reads 369 Votes
abbielou12 By abbielou12 Updated 2 years ago
Blake caught Kitty's attention the very first time they crashed into each other, literally. Unfortunately for Kitty, Blake also happened to be the older brother of her worst enemy. Louisa, head cheerleader and queen bee at school controls everything, except Kitty, the girl who is falling very quickly in love with Blake.
When a devastating accident happens it looks like it's too late for Kitty and Blake's relationship to be saved, that is until Louisa gets herself in a difficult situation.
Will Blake have to choose between the two most important girls in his life when Louisa finds herself in trouble, or will the girls manage to make up in time to solve their impossible feud before it's too late?
i like it so far. very fluent and easy to read with a good dynamic main character. on foward to the next chpater.
The opening is great, but I saw a few mistakes here and there. Though I think it's a little sad - for Kitty that is. Haha. Voted. :)
The opening is really powerful. I love it :) I've added it to my reading list and voted. :D
This is really interesting..im gonna read the chapters now:) Voted
Oh my goodness! Thankyou for dedicating this story to us! ^-^
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