Fantastic story! I was hooked from the opening and kept me curious and thinking throughout.
Wow. I must say, this is pure brilliance. Loved every bit of it and I could easily see the whole story occurring in my mind. Good job! (:
Great ending! I really enjoyed your description of the shop at the beginning, it encouraged me to read on...
This is cool, a very unexpected ending... you are great Mr. Mackenzie... wish I could learn more from you.
This is just perfect. One of the best stories I've ever read. You're pretty talented.
@dlmackenzie I have no doubt I will one day see you on bookshelves, if so I want an autographed copy!
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