That was awesome! I love how you have so much description and how you capture so much detail. You have me hooked. (:
the story was great and explained in detail..btw..it was sad to see her brother die
Wow. I was drawn by its first chapter. This is really awesome. I can feel the tense and the suspense. XD Good luck with the watty awards. I do really love it.
Really catchy opening, the entire chapter keeps readers at the edge of their seat. Good stuff. :)
Wow oh wow! I was hooked by the bookcover and drawn in by the first chapter. I loved it! :D
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