Stole My Heart (Completed)
Rebecca Thomas is new in town.She is cute,sweet and shy and hates being the centre of attention. Everything seems fine before she starts her new school. She has never had a boyfriend and has never been kissed. She believes in fairy tale romances and hopes that she will find her prince charming soon. Noah James is a popular jock and has a reputation of a player is West High School. When Rebecca and Noah cross paths her life takes an unusual turn. She makes a mistake by falling in love only to have her heart broken. She does everything to make him happy even if it hurts her .Can Noah ever realise what he means to her? Or she will always be just a friend to him? Will Noah and Rebecca ever be together?
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I really like this. The only point would be to check the punctuation and things but other than that it's a really good start. Kudos on the skills xx
Oh wow. This was a really good start, I enjoyed it. It was really amazing, the characters were great and so was the detail. I love it!
i love rebecca's character! she's exactly as you described her!! (which is awesome because that is a good skill to have when writing)
@aarti_athavle This is really good so far! :] Sure a few errors here or there, but this is good :3
Good start! A number of grammatical errors, but they can be overlooked. A bit cliche, but cliche doesn't always mean bad. Can't wait to continue!
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