This is really good, I think the rhythm is perfect. I know that sounds a bit insincere, but I really do think she did a good job. I love the message. :)
@shrooboid313 this is a good poem but can you take some "Love" out because it makes the poem amateur and takes away from the flow.
It's like being sweet and sad at the same time. The construction has some flaws in it like the weird rhyming sequences but overall I quite like it :D
oh deeary me, i've seen her vids on youtube, this one has to be one of the funnier ones though :L
@poetrygirl IT WAS WRITTEN BY NICHOLE337 ON YOUTUBE!! IT'S NOT SERIOUS!!!!!!!!!!!! HE'S BEING SARCASTIC!!!!
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