Borrowed [Watty Awards Finalist]

BOOK #1 Irissa is about to turn seventeen and her only birthday wish is to have the right to choose her own path in life, but there are those who want to choose for her. In a nation controlled by one man, all freedoms are jeopardized. One scientific corporation has too much control. PURE Industries has launched the Borrowed law. Teenage girls, who have just turned of age, will be submitted into the selection process. Irissa is one of them, and if she becomes a Borrowed, her life will change forever. What happens when a girl is forced in becoming a surrogate to a child she would never claim as her own? Join Irissa on her journey in discovering who the Borrowers are, what it is to become Borrowed and why the nation is obsessed with perfection. Can Irissa choose her own fate after all?
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@Jilleigh That's okay. I got sick of StoryWrite and got off, but I really love it! I can't wait for the sequel!
I read this on StoryWrite! I still love it and I can't wait to read the last few chapters! :)
@Jilleigh haha i liked the premise, probably that's why. i liked the light glistening in the text and stuff (if you know what i'm talking about....)
Really cool Prologue! I have no idea what's going on, which is good, as that makes me want to read on to find out more :)
I like this as a hook--good job adding mystery without really confusing the reader. The analytical tone in the beginning worked quite well. On to chapter 1!
Ooh, this is chilling! Well-written and hooking prologue - I'm definitely heading to the next chapter right now! :)


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