I thought the story was very interesting...I liked the length of the chapter and how the descriptions were in the story.
I stumbled across this in the watty awards library. This is pretty good. Nice work.
stunning....i love it...uve done really well,using the key elements of narrative writing
I'm adding to my library to read later. I like your description. I'll coment when I finish reading:)
Bah There is a lot to read... I only have limited time to make your trailer so i will come back and read the rest when i can :D But i like it alot :D
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| Name | DancingRainbow |
| Location | In Your Dreams |
| Member Since | Feb 01, 2011 |
| Votes Received | 846 |