good use of words to create the scene, and it seems interesting. your title also caught my attention and so did the summary. so great job.
I love the way you write...it really helps the story come to life and I love it! Great job!
Intense. That's the only word. I want to know what happens to her so I'll keep reading :)
I've always wanted to read a story about a pyromaniac. Really cool urges like kleptomania and stuff fascinate me. Reading on..and adding this to my library :)
Oh wow. This really capturied my attention. I enjoyed this, it was filled with detail which made it seem to come alive. I really liked this!
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