Desired {Watty Awards 2012}
The storm brought them here. The people were different. The water stretched on for miles. The Island they never heard of, it was something they never expected. To be here, to be told they would never go home. Alexis was young yet, only the age of nineteen and still finding herself. Drew was mysterious and quiet, only a bit older twenty two to be exact. They had only traveled out on the boat to get away from everything, it was only supposed to be a day trip. A day that would last a lifetime.
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khelrin
this was absolutely incredible! <3 the description and language used blew my mind completely. I cannot wait to keep reading!
I love the dialouge its a great story so far and yeah the chap was quite long but great job Voted!!
Oh mi gosh... I could ACTUALLY picture this happening... Wow... im so adding this to my list... Bookmarking it first..
Great description, but don't have too much otherwise it gets boring. And work on your first sentence of the book. It's suppose to draw me in
This was really good, had a clear picture of what you wrote in my mind! Well done!
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