Untitled.
Not her fault.
Recent Comments
JustARandomGirlxx
Perfectly written and ended with a powerful line. My favorite of this poem was the two lines "In the past And yet it lasts". Nicely put.
This poem is more than amazing ! Please read my new and first poem If Dreams Could Come True. And give me advice how to make it better .
That was amazing, you are really good at this I love this poem it is amazingly true and very beautiful. (:
This poem is definately deep. Keep up the good work. Looking forward to see more of your poems :)
last line should be "You've" not you're. should be "bunch of nerves" not "a nerves" peace ~)K
Add
Manage
Story added to My Library!
Add to your private library
My LibraryAdd this story to your public reading lists
Done
