Fantastic! Are you stalking me or something? Because this is something I can relate to. Anyways, like I said, perfect :)
Perfectly written and ended with a powerful line.
My favorite of this poem was the two lines "In the past And yet it lasts". Nicely put.
This poem is more than amazing !
Please read my new and first poem If Dreams Could Come True.
And give me advice how to make it better .
That was amazing, you are really good at this I love this poem it is amazingly true and very beautiful. (:
This poem is definately deep. Keep up the good work. Looking forward to see more of your poems :)
last line should be "You've" not you're.
should be "bunch of nerves" not "a nerves"
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