Lives Of A Twin [EDITING/ON HOLD/Lack Of Intrest]

when two orphaned identical twin girls raised and born on the south side with some serious history are adopted at 16 in to a rich family and new school,bougie girls, egotistic boys yeah nothing can go wrong right?
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I would try to work on your capitalizing your I's and using longer POV's sometimes. But other than that great story! I like it! :)
@meeka22 lol. as long as you structure your POV's strongly then you should be fine
you should work on your grammar a little more. i get how you wrote them but you should develop the POV's a little more


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