it was good but there were a few mistakes!! ^.^ they can be fixed easily though!! cool cover!! overall a nice start!! :D *voted*
this was great ! love the names really well choosen and the pace is perfect, dont forget to return the fav <3
Love the details. I like the concept too. The names fit perfectly for the characters! Great descriptions! Keep writing!
I like your character names! This is a great first chapter, and your descriptions are great! <3
Love the names fits with the characters and the plot is really good, it really good and love the description haha
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