Spidey
Romance / SciFi / Short Story - The Blush, something that happens to Peter Webb every time he meets a girl, but particularly Helen next door. Will she ever take him seriously, or will something unexpected come between them?
A short romance with a little SF twist...
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flora9797
That was awesome... Could have never imagined the climax that you came up with...
I found this such fun to read! A small error caught my eye, though; in the first bit of dialogue there needs to be a comma before Webby. Voted.
Ah, the joys of mutant nature :-) Caught a tiny blip where he was putting stuff in the jar with spidey. Said "raidiactive" instead of raidioactive".
Great twist! I think he deserved to get eaten...after accidentally turning his girlfriend into a spider and all!
Haha I like the ending, it made me laugh. :) =ery good story, I never imagined that it would end as it did.
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