damn this is good but you alread know that i mean come on 157 comments en 108 votes! (:i don't have someting negative to say actually so good job (: xx
This was fairly interesting. I loved the vast vocab-range. It amuses me always to see rarely shared words. :) This got my vote, surely. ^^
I;m not a fan of fantasy but i really liked this. You described things really well. I'm going to continue reading. Voted
I love how you chose Fire and Ice by Within Temptation for this chapter. It's one of my FAVORITE songs and it fits it perfectly. <3
YOur cover..wow, It fits your story perfectly! With your writing, everything is just so perfect including the plot and stuffs. Thumbs up!
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