I wanted to start from the beginning so I didn't get confused when reading a chapter further on in the book...
Great short story, really good from beginning to end and it keeps you engaged with the description and sentence structure you use :)
Grammar was damn good and your plot is amazing and I don't know who I'm starting to unlike Diana!!! She's givingr creeps!!
LOL, Uhhhh...I thought they were human. Really awesome beginning. I'm excited to see what's going to happen. Voting and adding to my library.
This is really good:) I like how you pick old fashiond and not commonly used names for your characters. Keep up the really good work! Voted Mollie
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