It's a really interesting set up! I was a bit confused at first but once I got into it, I absolutely loved it! (That's what she said?) Anyway, great job!
cant wait to read this story! lol. It's very interesting to read a different writing style. :)
I really like the idea and way you write it! The only think is you've got to work hard so it's not confusing, but good job! :)
your story is unique! :) great idea and it's different from all the other stories out there :D
I like this. I think its unique and your writing stile is refrshing. Different almost, which is a good thing (:
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