Honestly, love this. The beginning was funny and sarcastic, everything was really descriptive. Nice!
I Loved Those First Sentences. Caught My Attention Automatically. Everything Flowed Nicely, So It Was Easy To Follow Along. You Have Good Writing Skills :):)
This was really good. Loved that it was fairly long but not too long and it kept my entrest. Love the detail.
I like it :) It got my attention right away! The plot is interesting, I must admit (in a good way) ^_^
I love the similarity between the characters name and the title. It's a great story, I LOVE IT!
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