How did I flipping not read this sooner? So far so great. :) You've got amazing description. And it turns out you're a TAPper as well. Yayz!
Wow. Really good. Keep it up! I like how detailed everything is and how you show her feelings. Really good, I hope you continue.
@SomethingLikeEmily haha yeah, didn't you know? :p And thats awesome, can't wait for more :D
Eb! This is awesome! I love your description~ I saw a few grammatical errors, like you mixed up "your" and "you're" a few times, but issall good ;).
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