Coloring Book

A poem I made while following the syllable pattern 9, 4, 6
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@challenge647 I guess I'm just hungry when I read this. I can't process anything when I'm hungry. I'll reread it after I've eaten my breakfast. XD
@challenge647 well i always vote for every link sent to me so you definitely got your vote ;-)
Stuck for words trying to interpret this, work with me here, starting with the colouring book, probably why i hadnt commented on it earlier
the diffrences are small but it makes a great diffrence and reads better then before :)
I may never understand how you are able to write with such depth. 
I envy you and your creativity with words. XD
Conveying a lot though miserly use of words. I liked the structure of the poem unconventional and fresh. Good work :)


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