23 Extraordinary Forevers
It was at that very moment I felt a sensitive touch.I would have stood there in an endless reality had Donny not slid his ams around my waist. I was instantly pulled into a world where everything was perfect. When ever I was in his arms, I was at home. The world wasn’t such a scary place, and everything was okay. No fear, no lies, no pain. It was a mystery to me how I could find perfection in one persons arms.
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Melody_Lee
All right! So far so good! I definitely enjoyed how your MC and Brandon interacted, and I will now be moving on to your next chapter. voted :)
i hate it. omg im totally kiddding . its just 3 am and i needed to fool someone. ;D you write like a pro and you should definitely continue with your work :)
your writing sounds extremely professional. you also go into a lot of detail which is good :) the story sounds good so far.. keep writing! :)
This was interesting to read. Made me feel all fuzzy inside and (bleep). Lol. Great job, youre onto becoming a good romantic writer.
Great way how you flowed the story from one descriptive sentence to another. Looking forward to the rest of your writings! Voted.
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