Divide (GirlxGirl)

29 Part Story 552K Reads 7K Votes
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Divide isn't a normal town. It has Wolves, Witches, and Vampires and they are all divided into different parts of the town. Violet is a wolf and she has three brothers named Ethan, Lucas, and Scott and when she starts to protect a witch name Chloe everything changes. Will the town set aside their differences and fight together during the biggest war of their time.
the story is great! but I agree you need a bit of editing specially the grammar. anyways, you have one great plot!
Just needs a little bit of editing, but I like this story :)
You, the writer, said on the beginning of the first page, and I quote "Hey guys this my first book so I'm accepting advice, BAD or GOOD". If you didn't want someones advice, then don't put that there.
NONNONONONONONONONO! Please re-do this! 3rd person in a LGBT story w/ vampires is horrible! > ~ <
If you want someone to edit your work. Grammer check stuff like that just contact me
This is the first story that i read,, so far so good uhmm nah it's AWESOME.. wow i loving it...