wow, very good. clever idea... am reading on (leaving a trail of dirty paw prints as i go) ;)
well I am not one for Sci fi but your 'attempt' certainly 'piqued' my interest. You did a wonderful job, I did not expect anything less from you. :-)
Fail! I just realized that's all you plan to post! :( I would keep reading if you wrote more though... You know for the record.
@nikayaya well you know it's not my genre, but I do believe my dear you did it justice.
Whatever the judges decide, whether you progress or not, this really is an excellent piece :)
Pretty cool idea, you didn't seem to green in this area :) I think you covered it pretty well and it's entertaining too :D
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