I like how u started off. But, the one thing I noticed here the run on sentences. Commas!! :)
Sounds like some elements that are just enough off the norm to keep interest...good luck to you! Write on!
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| Name | YasminBlue |
| Location | UK And No It Don't Rain ALL The Time -_- |
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