Cliffhanger??!??!!!!?!!! Who is it? i like your characters. You need tp edit but its great so far. I think your storyline is really interesting. Voted
@GuardianAngel14 ike something tht'll draw the readers more into the story yu kno? But this was a really good start :)
@GuardianAngel14 Hmmm this was definitely a good start out XD maybe a little more Ooomph Lol but its pretty good XD reading onto the next chap!!!! ;D
Interesting story! I wonder where it's going, and what the big picture is going to be :)
Haha Martian. I know a girl named Claire. Hate her. Good job! I can't wait to read more! Voted :)
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