Emotion is leaking off the screen, you bring your charecter's to life! Sorry for such a long wait. Voted, and I'm deffanitely going to read further on c:
I love all your comparisons, and your unique way of writing, the way you describe things is amazing(: Blue makes you feel really bad for him though. D:
This is incredibly powerful. I like the amount of description and the story line is something worthy of keeping up with. Keep up the good work
Amazing. I love your descriptions and the use of words the characters use, this flows very well, it's incredible! Keep up the fantastic work! ((:
Wow this is really good. Descriptive, flows smoothly, good dialogue. You should totally update soon so I can read more! Good job!
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