I don't like his mom or step-father because I actually detest cheaters and home wreckers. Now, putting that aside, I think this is a really good beginning!
the tense is all mumble jumble and it gets a bit confusing along with grammar, but the story seems interesting fix that up and it'll be wicked I reckon :)
please please update. I and dieing to hear what happens next. I <3 your writing. I love ya.
Hey, I'm on here cause of your other story 'run with me' just wanted to let you know that your note worked!! And both stories are really good :D
Loved this first chapter, it sounds really interesting can't wait to see what happens next.
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