I liked your formating, It had a hypnotic effect and I loved the emotional movement of the poem.
This is beautiful !!! :))) I really felt appreciative of what I have.. :))))) You are talented :))))
i love this, its so perfect and it makes you happy with what you have already got. lovely x
That poem is amazing, beautiful, stupendous! It makes you realize what you have, its very beautiful x
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