Every word of this poem is so beautiful. I like the flow. Those who are in love will truly understand this. love it!
Awww so sweet and well written. Though when u use enjambenment, u still need a capital letter at the start of each line :)
Aww! That was soo sweet and beautiful! It was very poetic and its got a nice ring to it! Ever thought about writing country music?
OMG!!!! That was sooo sweet .....
Loved how u actually took the clichéd lines and turned them into amazing lines :D
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