Unexpected (OLD *UNEDITED* VERSION)

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She is the Chosen One. He is Gabriel Gavino, il prossimo Mafioso Don - 
    the next in line. Before she saves anyone they're going to save each 
    other.
Edited as in grammar or edited as in the details of the story ?
I love the story.  Thinking now how they would find the Choosen one. Why are they running and hidding? 
                                    
                                    Greetings from Colombia.
Uh...is rejection out already because I am already liking it.
fell thru the cracks. kids slip thru without notice all the time,  This is why we pray,
Wow I had skipped it but I'm going back to download it. It sounds great.  See you.
I have an apple AND a glass of water, who winning now? 
                                    
                                    
                                    
                                    
                                    
                                    
                                    
                                    
                                    
                                    
                                    
                                    
                                    
                                    
                                    
                                    "Sighs" I know I know