you know a story is going to be good when the Prologue pulls you in, defiantly fanning. You should check out our in dev. story The Broken Chain.
This kind of reminds me of this one movie called The Village. I can't wait to read more.
Amazing, with just one paragraph, you had me entranced. Eventhough it was short, it was brilliant.
i saw the cover (loved it!), read the plot ( loved it) now i am hooked ! now this is a story
Now THAT is how to start a story :) I'm already hooked, and I LOVE the plot- very original :) I'm sure I'm gonna love this! Xx
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