I like what you do with the endings it gives people more of something to talk about;) and this poem sort of reminds me of Annabel Lee by Edagr Allen Poe:)
Why dead? Why dead? You could have had her move to the other side of the world, had her turn a lesbian but DEAD! WHY! WHY! WHY!!
wow i was surprised at the end my eyes went wide like flying saucers loll i love this poem
Aw, nakakalungkot naman 'to--isang napakalaking kurot sa puso!
PS Pasensya na at ngayon lang ako nagka-time magbasa.
Wow that was a really good poem, I like how it just drew me in and it felt like I could picture and feel everything since it was so descriptive!
Really nice, yet the ending was really sad, but a good sad that adds character to the poem.
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