I feel like this really expresses how people just keep on wanting...whether they can have what they desire or not.
I love how you get the message across without even admitting that there is one (if you know what I mean...)
Loved it! I would have put a full stop on the end of the last line, just to make the ending a bit more final.
Wow. Your writing continues to amaze me...!
I loved this poem, it's short but fast-paced. SO good!!
Hoping for more like this! :)
Loved it!!! Seems like this huge observation going on in the inside leading to one conclusion.
I wonder what the secret is! Agh it's driving me crazy! I like how it keeps me wondering!
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