A Tearless World (Editing!)
Ali has never seemed to fit in. Competing with a perfect brother and whinny sister as well as juggling school is not easy. So when she stumbles across a new world, she thinks it's a dream come true. But is there a dark secret is hidden beneath? And will she ever discover this worlds dark hidden secrets before it's too late? Read and find out!
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WeWriteRandomThings
There were a few grammatical errors but I like how you weren't overly descriptive Overall nice work
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