I really like the plot and practically everything about it. Got me hooked on the first part :D
Really enjoying the story. Like Harry's character. Looking forward to seeing where the story takes me.
Wow! Great opening. Good red hearing about whether Crawford was the florist. Or is it a red herring?
SO AMAZING read the whole first page and loved every second of it!!! Truley great
Wow this is soo amazing :3 I only read a few line and i just had to comment! Your so cool! (;_;) to be able to write like this.
Add to your private library
My LibraryAdd this story to your public reading lists
| Name | Mary E. Martin |
| Location | toronto |
| Member Since | Dec 17, 2010 |
| Votes Received | 430 |