I love it. You have a few errors with tense but besides this it is a wonderful, well written, intriging story and i'm not past page two.
@john_chan Keep working that thing you call smiley voodoo and your request just might happen. ;p
I don't know exactly what it is about your writing/ style but what ever it is, it makes me smile. :) Why did that have to rhyme. Dx
I've only just started reading this story and I'm already enjoying it a lot! It's amazing!
This is great. I just started it, and fantasy and adventure stories are lovely. I'm learning a lot from it, thank you.
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