My Guardian Angel

1 Part Story 378 Reads 45 Votes
JiyaPan By JiyaPan Completed
all of us dream of having our guardian angel.. we even have our own description's for them..well, for me this is how i see MY GUARDIAN ANGEL
great flow, like the summer winds blow. nice use of words, now everone has heard. your a great poet no everyone knows it
awww. Very cute. Flows well... and I just adore the concept. =) Well done!
I think this is my favorite poem that you've written so far. I really like the desciptive language in it and the loving mood. It gives off a nice, warm feeling. :) ~Voted.
love it =) its very sweet, mainly focuses on one strong emotion and it had a good rhyming scheme =) it has simple words but it gives out the meaning strongly nonetheless =) well written =)
It's nice to see poems with hidden stories and inspirations  to it. Great job! :)
Aw, it's so cute! I  really love it. <3 You descibed him so well, and used awesome imagery. I could actually invision what he looked like, and the intensions he had were so selfless. ^^ Great job, I applaud you. Vote~