Great story telling. The relationships work well and the internal workings of your heroine's mind are aptly portrayed. Will certainly read on.
Wow it's so suspenseful! I don't really know what's going on but I'm getting hints on what's happening. :) Very interesting... :D
Suspenseful start. I love the concept of this lady sharing a body with this mysterious man...!
I love your writing, the excitement, brutality, honesty, I couldn't stop reading, and the sequel is equally gripping! Thanks for sharing this story with us :)
Wow....that line "Don't go, he pleads" brings about such strong emotions! I'm def gonna keep reading this :)
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