I love the effect you made on your cover's title. It makes it more... mystical :)
Great Job! I loved it! It was a great description and plot! =) I absolutely loved this, you are one hell of a good writer! =)
wow very nice description. i loved the imagery used. especially between Ash and Enya. They would make a great couple to me for some reason. Great job on this.
Nice job! The description was beauifully done!!! The way you set it up definetely caught MY attention! So far I'm not seeing any grammar issues...great job!!!
I enjoyed this a lot because it is different from most things I read on here (: please keep going on with this.
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